Trisha Freeman – “a single thought”

Here’s a great little piece I discovered last month from poet Trisha Freeman. It stirs up a world of memory and feeling in me every time I read it.

a single thought

a newspaper rustles
a ball bounces
and I think of you
because that’s all I have now
well
have ever had of you
a thought on my brain
you gave me no more
so I left
and here I lay
with another man
in his bed

and it was only a few months ago
you were inside of me
and we talked about having babies

Trisha Freeman

Did you feel it? Bam! A little shot of reality, personal and true. Very tight, not a wasted word, and so real it hurts. This is the kind of poetry I like the best.

2 Comments

  • 1. matthew&hellip  |  August 7th, 2010 at 3:18 pm

    BAM indeed! well done, trisha.

  • 2. Melissa&hellip  |  August 9th, 2010 at 9:53 am

    So much story and feeling in so little space. You touched me.